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Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Our Big Trip (WEEEEEE)!!!

Our Big Trip (WEEEEEE)!!!

Here is my awesome story I like it!!!


Here is my video
I like my writing because it is long and like how I have used punctuation and set my writing out by using paragraphs.
My next step is to not be shiye when putting stuff on my blog!
DO YOU GUYS LIKE IT???
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2016 at 12:03 PM

    Hi Caleb.
    This is a great story love your onomatopoeia it makes your story sound way more interesting and exciting. I think this is one of your best story yet!
    maybe next time talk a little louder so people can hear you better and how good your story is.
    Ka pai!

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