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Friday, November 25, 2016

Emprovment!!!

The white is the emprovment!!!

4 comments:

  1. Hi Caleb I like your story Because some one falls.

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  2. Hey Caleb this is a big emprovment for you and last time I checked your work it was a bit diffrent and I hope you are having a fun time learning caleb but I have to sign off by saying thank you for helping me in learning

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  3. Kia ora Caleb.
    I can see from this that your skills in writing have improved. It is great seeing the different ways that people have written by using these pictures. Nice job.

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  4. Hey Caleb this is a big emprovment for you I like how you putted like or as blog u later .

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